Friday, September 3, 2010

Spring Day

In today's writing, Room 12 were trying to use topic words and we were trying to create mind pictures about spring. Some of us are working on using similes and describing words. How do you think we did? Please leave us a comment and tell us what you think.





It's the first day of spring. I am so excited because the days are getting longer. The blossoms are gorgeous. I just can't believe it's spring. baby lambs are playing in the cold breeze. Baby goats are doing head knocks and foals are having races on the bright green fields. Spring is so beautiful! But I don't want a bee sting - ow! - Hayley

Spring is a beautiful season. Flowers are blooming bright and colourful. I like spring because its warm and baby animals are being born. Spring is fantastic. I like playing in spring because the days are longer. I love spring. - Matthew



Today is the first day of spring. In spring baby animals are being born and hatching. Bright colourful flowers bloom. In spring baby leaves are growing on trees. You can hear birds singing up in trees. Spring makes me happy because I know it's getting warmer. Flowers are as colourful as a rainbow. - Charlotte

Today is the first day of spring. I like it when the birds sing in the morning. In spring the days are longer. There are new leaves growing as well. New baby animals are born in spring. Bees will get pollen. - Jed



Spring is my favourite season. It is the first day of spring. It makes me feel happy. Spring makes the flowers grow and spring makes the animals have babies. The days get longer and warmer. - Wian

It's the first day of spring. Lovely baby animals are born. The birds wake up with their gentle singing. The days are much longer. - Jaydee





I like spring because it is a beautiful season. In spring there are so many beautiful flowers. I like spring because baby animals are born. Spring makes flowers grow. In spring it is warm and sunny. - Charlee

It's the first day of spring. Spring is the time when new things are born. The kind of animals that are born are ducklings, calves, playful lambs , puppies, kittens, kids and birds. Did you know that the days are longer? Beautiful colourful flowers bloom and fresh baby leaves grow. - Anya



Today is the first day of spring. Days are longer than winter days. Some days are warm and sunny. Colourful, delicate flowers grow, like blossoms. Blossoms are white, pink and sometimes purple. The petals shimmer in the sun. - Alannah

1 comment:

  1. What fantastic spring stories you have all written. I certainly got a great picture in my head because you have used wonderful topic words and you have describe spring perfectly. I love spring time too. Keep up the great writing.

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