Wednesday, November 3, 2010

Poem of the week




Hayley drew an amazing picture of the world of the Shiver Shark. Look how much detail she added. We thought you illustrated the poem beautifully, Hayley!


The Shiver Shark
Down beneath the water,
Down beneath the waves,
Down beneath the slimy sludge,
There lies an ocean cave,
Deep within the ocean cave,
Deep within the dark,
Deep within its rocky walls,
There lies the shiver shark.

The Shiver shark is waiting,
Where the river sharks all hide,
The shiver shark is waiting ….
And his mouth is open wide!

Don’t go … beneath the water,
Down beneath the waves,
Down beneath the slimy sludge,
Into the ocean cave,
For deep within the ocean cave,
Deep within the dark,
Deep within its rocky walls,
There lies the shiver shark!

Jill Eggleton

3 comments:

  1. Well done Hayley! I like how much detail you put into your poem. It was a great idea when you drew the shark coming staight out at us! Charlotte

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  2. Dear Hayly
    I like you poem.

    by Mia

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  3. I love your blog love anya

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